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Walking in these woods-I am all alone.
I feel the wind on my face, the cold breath.
Feeling my feelings, I am in my zone,
Thoughts going through my mind on love and death.

The leaves fall down and all the colors change,
The cold, chilly air sets into the season
Like a trade- the summer-winter exchange.
Darling, I finally found my reason.

Love is not like seasons-it never dies.
Love's color nev'r changes or fades away.
It is constant just like how the time flies.
I hope deep inside you, too, feel this way.

My passionate love for you is quite strong,
And deep down, you have felt this all along.
More poetry.
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I love the emotion you put into your work...and not only about that poetry but all others kind of art you do and did....I respect arts, poems and other ways to show our creativy...when the art show the true feelings from who did that.....and when I feel the same feelings I put on my drawings in other arts that really touch me...you choose the perfect words to put in every lines and rhymes....not only your intelligence....and more than smart words...you write with your heart....

It's the second time you post that poetry...I remember the first time I had read really touch me...and even know continue touch me for remember what I felt and feel reading that...the way you show how love are for you I really respect...."love" could be a word for some people...only a simple word that make other suffer a lot....but when we really feel that....and created a meaning for that...not with our mind but with the heart....it's really impossible accept kiss other lips....or holding others arms ....when our feelings belong only for the one we love....the one we could continue loving forever and ever....with or without them in our arms....
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000SkyArrow000 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Love that poetry....and that title fit more perfect than the other....even I love both...>///<
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Art-By-Stephanie Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! I thought so too. ^^
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000SkyArrow000 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You are very welcome dear!!~♥...^^
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